Third Mock Results and Comments

I obviously don't have the time right now to write comments as extensive as those I wrote over Spring Break.

In a nutshell: some of you are really improving and working hard, and some of you are still refusing to adhere to the rubrics for reasons known only to your unmyelinated selves. (I suspect you are actively trying to drive me insane.)

Buckle down. Focus. Do the work. Produce History.

Multiple Choice Raw Score Distribution

50+	1
40-50	4
36-40	10
30-35	8
20-29	8
Less Than 20	2

AP Score Distribution

5	3 Oda, Nerdboy, Fishface
4	12
3	9
2	5
1	4

Second Mock Average Score: 3.12

Students Securely Following Essay Rubrics and Guidelines	16
Students Who Have Started Following Guidelines and the Rubric, Showing Clear, Glorious Improvement	3 James, ShirleyU. and Zunak. You make me want to cry with joy!
Students Showing Slow Improvement Who Probably Want to Speed It Up	7
Students Who Continue to Ignore or Neglect The Rubric and Guidelines, Don't Heed Comments, Won't Learn the Geographic Regions and are Actively Trying to Land Me in a Little White Hospital on the Top of a Hill...	7

Third Mock Average Score: 3.15

Essay Self-Improvement

Students Securely Following Essay Rubrics and Guidelines

16

Students Who Have Started Following Guidelines and the Rubric, Showing Clear, Glorious Improvement

3

James, ShirleyU. and Zunak.
You make me want to cry with joy!

Students Showing Slow Improvement Who Probably Want to Speed It Up

7

Students Who Continue to Ignore or Neglect The Rubric and Guidelines, Don't Heed Comments, Won't Learn the Geographic Regions and are Actively Trying to Land Me in a Little White Hospital on the Top of a Hill...

7

Comments (Read to the end.)

I. Language Use

II. Historical and Geographic Content

I just nearly broke my kitchen table because even after all the drama surrounding the last Mock, a student STILL placed Japan in Southeast Asia.
- And it ended up being 4 of you. I took my straighjacket out of my closet--I am very close to having a neighbor put it on me. The only thing holding me back is my fear that I will not get my lease renewed if I do this.

III. AP Essay Specific Comments

IV. What to do and what not to do:

V. Final Points

--WJT.

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